Great piece but, we can't access your wip photo as you put a link to your computer's internal link, try to post it on any form of social media or a separate post on newgrounds without the b-LVL99 tag in it so it doesn't count as an entry but shows your mid progress and put the link in by editing your post. you're welcome! oh and for future pieces, try to make the colours more even by, what i can see is marker, try to use the flicking method for even colour blending and tone or if it is partially digital or full, lay a base colour, then a rough outline, then rough darks, then rough highlights, then refine the details and shapes and finally outlining if necessary. Hope these tips helped!